Kalapsia's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Death Of Jerking]

r u serious

omfg i funk 2 dis song on da streets, thiss isnt gay at all i cant belive dat som1 would evn say dat dis is gay like srsly me nd da boys jerk all tha time men shit fuk u u guay and dis song is gud only cuz its made by doze guyz.

JK-595 responds:

Jerking is whack... point blank period.

[[LK] Video Game Loop]

sweet!

this sounds like paragonx9! :D

[Moonlight (final draft)]

hey do you have a AIM or MSN?

i would like to remix this! :)

[Party @t Tokyo]

Hmm

The drums in the beginning sound like it could be more in a dance song, but that's not necessarily a bad thing although I would have used the classic trance drums with some percussion here and there. The bass was pretty bland, and it sounded like it could have been one from those generic dance songs ><. It seems like most of the synths that you used sound like they were meant for a dance song. The arp gate thing wasn't too bad, it kind of gave me this really upbeat feeling throughout the song. I'm not saying a trance song can't be upbeat, but I feel like this kind of upbeat melody would probably be better fit for a dance song. At 1:43 the saw sounds a little too raw for me :/. Are you using nexus dance leads :P? Most of the synths sound really unrefined ><. The melodies were decent, but they weren't terrible. I think you need to work on your composition and synth choice. The structure was alright, but a little repetitive. Overall the song needs some work. Even though you put the song under trance, I think this has more dance elements to it than trance. Anyways check out these VSTs for better synths: Sylenth, Nexus (:P), Z3ta, and Vangarde. Hopefully this was helpful :-/. With some more practice and experience you'll become much better!

5.5/10

5/5 4.31 / 5.00 (+ 0.11)

Airprogressive responds:

Really this is not a trance track. I think it's more near to be a rave track, but there's no rave in newgrounds, so I choose to name it as trance. The bass is exactly the same bass that has ''Scream For More'', a track from Kate Ryan. I know that it can sound a bit generic xD

I wanted to give to the track that Nipon touch', that's the reason of the strange synths & melodies xD

Thanks u 4 your review man!!

:)

[Wyze - Tribute to Mickeymao]

yeeeeaaa

this is great, plz maek mor!!! b/c my bruther herd dis in da bakround nd he rlly rrlly like it!!!! man i luv rap~~

Blasphem-E responds:

rofl

[-The Facility- (Demo)]

hi hi

4.44 / 5.00 (+ 0.26)

anyways cool song. some saw synth thing comes in around :31, try fixing some of the notes on that because they sound a little awkward. anyways sweet reese bass lols.

SteakJohnson responds:

thankayou and I agree

[Sky Candy [Box-killa]]

KEWL!

yea dis si soo kool!

3.42 / 5.00 (+ 0.54) :DDDD do u wan be my frend?

[A Sign Of My Love For You]

wow omg

omg micheal i love it!!! i love you!!!

[Solar Eclipse [DnB]]

you got this shit down fast

looks like you got that gritty bass that you always wanted, in your other tunes it wasn't nearly as strong as this one. can't wait to hear some new tracks! what drum samples do you use now?

3.96 / 5.00 (+ 0.16)

saw your news post... i'll try increasing your scores

SteakJohnson responds:

hah thanks kalapsia, samples for this song are like 2-3 layered breaks from i think it was called Ekaj's Breaks. and the default fruity snare layered in there.
gritty bass is from Masssive which I realized completely destroys Sytrus at making reeses.