z75 - Flowing Mist Good!
I like the semi gritty bass in the beginning, although once the drums start coming in I thought the notes were going to change more frequently to make it more interesting. Throughout the whole song I felt like the whole atmosphere was really skewed and unclear. When the semi gritty bass came in, I was thinking the song was going to sound somewhat sinister, giving the whole song character and originality. Don't get me wrong the song isn't generic or anything, but in my personal opinion I felt like the song was very bland. The synth around :22 was what really killed it for me, it sounded somewhat annoying after awhile since the note is being constantly played without breaks, like a pad. Something that I didn't expect was the piano, it really confused me on what kind of atmosphere you were going for. The 1:43 melody in my opinion sounds like it could be used in a dance song. There could have been more drum variations and transitions to make the song have more energy. Around 1:53 the synth in the background was kind of annoying, atleast on these crappy headset I'm using. But the best part of this song was your mastering. It was done really damn well, kudos! In general, I liked the song, it has some potential to have much more energy to keep the audience's interest in the song while still having it's originality. I think you need to work on your composition on this song a little bit more.
Overall good job.
8.1/10
5/5 4.15 / 5.00 (+ 0.12)